This is the most ignorant ending I have ever seen before. Though it merits your soft style. Just look over your stories before you post them from now on.

Sweet story dude, hey every body Salvidar is my friend he sits next to me in class O, werd up to my dogs.lol

Wonderfully morbid, perhaps you are not the little ray of sunlight rumors made you to be. Keep writing, I must see what happens to this poor excuse for flesh.
Though you should look into re-reading your scriptures so you will not misspell or make any other sorts of mistakes.

Damn i really feel sorry her
great writting a hell'a lot better than anything i've ever written. Keep writting don't stop here!