stick with the depressing stuff.
sorry if that sounded mean, it wasnt ment to be but your thinger said to leave a comment even if its negitive. so there u go, your first negitive comment from me.

Don't wanna get you down, but surely you've got happier poems than this? I mean, this poem kinda makes you feel bad 'cause it looks like you're too depressed to even try. Perhaps I should read some of your other works...

Cute. Pristine...green... jello? Lol, I read the reviews for Pete's poem.
Melanie