Your words are so well chosen and so true...
You depict very well this terrible feeling one can experience...
Keep it up

Again, you're writing just has class and dignity and just it's up there...I love reading your stuff...no one has a style like you.
PS:I see you have ACTs Ah in your profile, to me they were easy..no screaming needed :D

wow, talented!

Your bio looks like you eat chocolate enchaladas! Made me laugh. This poem though has a beautiful seriousness to it, a black blanket to centre your mind and focus on the subject. Just minf the spelling errors, still no sill but other than that is is really good, well laid out and written with some good words.
Keep writing and good luck.
Nine Iron

Wow, I feel like this all the time, so i really know what you're getting at here! Very well written, go you :P