wow. im intrigued. i guess hes going to end up being a mage or something like that. very cool. keep writing.

I hope that you know that you are not as bad a writer as you apparently think that you are. When I read this, I thought that it was pretty good. I urge you to write more so I can read it. ^_^ And I think that the name you used, Widdle, was so cute. Keep up the good work. I would ask you to go and read my story, but I can't I accidently deleted it or something because it's not on here anymore.