Bravo.
You've managed to capture the reader in a way others have failed, using just the right amount of romance, action, and magic.
I only hope that the sequel is just as good.
Thank you for your time.

What's Gniriff Ustosti Peht?

I'm confused. I don't get it! In your first two books, all of the 'rightful rulers' of the countries or whatever have marks on their wrists, and they don't even know they're there.
Why don't they know? And why does it only show when Sorlo does a dumb little magic trick wave thing? How could Sorlo have even seen it if Ami can't?
And how did those marks get there in the first place? I suppose that the king slits the little one's wrist or something with the mark and then it disappears?
One more thing...

I don't understand. I thinkn that a G rating would be just as, or more appropriate. Why are you all hyped on upping it?

Aw...thats so sweet of him. i think i know how Ami feels. i have to try and forget someone too. but at least he promised to come back!! on to story #3 now!!

Aw, that was kind of sweet. Young love does really suck sometimes. :P Pity, Sorlo was definitely one of my favourite characters. You wrote the awkwardness between them preceding the sudden rush of feelings well.
Oh, and the end of the fight with Jerron was kind of sad. I hate it when the bad guys seem nicer at the end.
I see you've got a new story up. I might check that out, when I find the time. I hate being busy sometimes.
Thanks for the review!
- sofi x

that was awesome! I am gonna go check and see if you have your new one up yet! YAY!

come on i want to read the last chapter! post the last chaptert already! now you only have one review to go before you update. update son!

Two more reviews to go.
Lol. Don't worry, I'm not going to leave a review just like that. I like how you've ended the brother-sister conflict in this chapter. Every story needs a bad guy, but you have romantized it so that he isn't truly all that bad. Rather than being extremely sick minded, he is driven by greed for power yet still has his moral qualities, allowing the reader to empathize the last moments of his life. In doing so, it made that part that much more dynamic. In a way, it can also be taken as a moral lesson. That regardless of mutual dislikes between two siblings, they are still brothers and sisters - in both the literal and figurative sense.

i'm just reviewing so you'll put up the last chapter sooner. i really like the story and the fight seen in the last chapter is really good. i like how jerron dies.

okay so I tried to review more than once...Didn't work. Lol. I was really upset. oh well...I loved that chapter! I am kinda excited that her bro is dead...isn't that horrid? You described everything really well...I cannot wait for your next chapter! I won't be able to review next week b/c I am gone though..but i know that I would love your chapters!

you still didn't update. that's not nice. but about the story; wouldn't jerron be better at swordfighting then ami would? he's older and stronger. but i like how he dies. come on post the epilogue already!

SWEET!

hey no fair. you didn't tell us if the two get together or not. is it in the epilogue? if so, give us the epilogue.

* GASP * ... He has a slow mind come to think of it...and as for the italic and the bold stuff... I want to know how that happens too... i need it for my stories...