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| girl-23 2004-05-01 ch 1,  | abuseGreat start! Continue soon! Laura |
| FAKE?romances 2004-04-30 ch 1, | abuseoh wow. scary. i loved the ending...SO unexpected. only suggestion: maybe you could add a few more details about what henry's feeling at the end. why he was driven to killing his father, the desperation he felt...etc. but all in all, i loved the way you used the language. nice. |