That was disturbing but written in an entertaining way.

damn, this is awesome. whatever perverted world these people live in has really caught my attention. please continue.

-smiles. Call me insane, I thought this was great because it felt realistic.

Odd lol it's like it's in an alternate universe because the dialogue doesn't seem so real. And oh how canibalism perturbes me! Umm, keep it up.. this could get interesting.
Jenna

Hah, that was awesome. I'd love to read more of it.

I'm feeling very oddly over this story. I'm disturbed, yet slightly turned on. That's not right! Anyway, I'm interested. There were a few paragraph issues. Just make sure you start a new one each time someone new speaks. I always get a little dazed when there's mistakes in that. But, yes, good story.

This was seriously disturbing. But interesting. You've piqued my interest.