This is something I think many youthful individuals can relate to. Which is why it comes across so realistically. Which is why I’m adding it to my favorites. Well done.

hmm... somewhat disturbing but mostly confusing. you may want to work a bit on spacing your paragraphs because it can lead to more confusion. lol.

The stream-of-consciousness presentation of this one really contributed to its gritty, intimate appearance; I'm quite impressed with how you depicted the mindset of someone in that position, having been there many times myself. While the lack of spaces and the cluttered paragraph might, at least initially, serve to render it inapproachable for the casual reader, there's no problem with them. A nearly-perfect piece of work.

I love this one, you have true talent, really, you do. The intro was sensational!

Very dark and disturbing, a good short one. The title is great, catchy. The only problem I found was; I'm not sure psychical is a word. Good job, keep writing.