Wow, that's so emotional! Great job with the descriptions, too.

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P.S. See you on the forums :)

This is sad, dark... I know what it's like to be the person who is drowning with out knowing it.

You're writing is so expresive, so personal... I have a hard time shairing my poetry with people because it is so personal, but I really like your writing styles.

Marjorie

Wow! Don't know if this is supposed to be a metaphor for something else, but if it is, GREAT JOB! This is definitley going on my fave stories list.

dragonzz