Interesting poem, very symbolic and descriptive. I like it - it's direct and not unnecessarily wordy.

This gives such a feel of lostness, sadness, hopelesness, but I'm not sure what it's about. I think tha tgives it power... it could be about amything, but so so sad... You write things that are so sad, and yet so powerful.

Marjorie

this could symbolize many different things. is it meant to be anything in particular? Or just a raindrop?

I liked how much thought you put into this. You effectively leave a sense of sadness in the reader. Good job!

I loved it. Nice metaphor.