|Reviews for The Love That Shouldn't Have Been|
| Vincenza 6/30/04 . chapter 3
I like this story. Write more soon.
| Raymond Lamar Gilstrap 5/27/04 . chapter 1
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| Daniels lover 5/26/04 . chapter 3
cool i like it, interacial couples interest me. please update soon.
| Lissezplait 5/19/04 . chapter 2
please update,update,update ,update
please*gives sad puppy dog look*
| Eagle Seance 5/13/04 . chapter 2
oh yuk. the frog bit reminded me of... never mind. Great chapter- continue!
| Kellyilla 5/8/04 . chapter 2
Wow. This story is really good so far. Can't wait to read more of this! :-)
| Monique 5/5/04 . chapter 2
Aw!...cute chapter!I can't wait for more. thanks for the update I'm watching this story like a hawk!
| Soumyanee 5/3/04 . chapter 1
Hey, good chapter, although a few mistakes, nothing major, so hope you update soon!
| la 5/3/04 . chapter 1
| D. Wilder 5/3/04 . chapter 1
cute. i like the idea behind your story. excellent! update soon and please read my stories.
| Eagle Seance 5/2/04 . chapter 1
I like interracial romance fics! And this one sounds good. Well written- i hope u continue!
| Monique 5/2/04 . chapter 1
| DrwMln1 5/2/04 . chapter 1
hello, this story is very interesting, i hope you continue with it!... DrwMln1