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Reviews For: Cleopatra's Spell

angelbymistake
2004-09-11
ch 1,
this is so good. swear! :) keep writing this... uh.. unless you dont want to.. but it's nice. and yeah, i can feel your hurt.. *pats your back* that's okay. :) btw, hope you can read my story if you have the time.
Ruthy
2004-05-23
ch 1,
thats realy good...i can tell you put alot of emotion into it.verry well written.The only thing i would point out is the raiting...its G and you cussed in it.but other than that it good.
darkpaladin13
2004-05-01
ch 1,
Musta had some kinda spell to make you like this. Dude, this poetry got a lot of feelin to it...some seriously good stuff here.
Sarah-Angel87
2004-05-01
ch 1,
wow, i wih someone loved me as much as to inspire them to write soemthing like this. you should give her your work, then she would see how you feel for her. you must have put alot of work into this, its excelent! you are a Very good writer, and she's sad inspiration. Great job and i think you should give her this poem. you never know...whats the worst that could happen.
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