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| Psyence 2004-09-17 ch 1,   | one word - WOW! amazing, seriously. i like the beginning - 'i cut a hole in my head', very abstract. you're a great poet ^_^ |
| suicidal-greeting 2004-09-03 ch 1, | WooW...Awesome! This is really good. I love it. It sounds like something that I'd come up with, but I think you did a better job!! lol..Anyway, this is amazing, I love it. It's going on my faves for sure! Thanks for reviewing "No More Miss Perfect" by the way!! |
| dustytiger 2004-07-24 ch 1, | wow! that was a really well written peice |
| Dancinggal5389 2004-06-13 ch 1, | Tragic and beautiful, another poem with very lyrical, pretty language |
| Akaiyume 2004-06-08 ch 1, | I like this poem of you, especially the ending and the idea of crying to someone's ghost. Well done! (thx for reviewing mine..:D) |
| subhumans8 2004-06-04 ch 1, | wow, really good, i bet this woud make a great song, the rhyming worked really well, and i really liked all your analigies (oh,i know i can spell);) keep writin! |
| Nighttime Wanderer 2004-06-01 ch 1, | Very good. Very insightful. Very true. |
| Heather Montgomery 2004-05-31 ch 1, | Very heavy. I like it. Especially the first few lines and the last line. Great job! |
| kamikaze899 2004-05-10 ch 1, | wow.. angst-ness.. cool.. very nicely written; keep up the good work ^^ |