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Oh this one is absolutely beautiful sniff sniff you made me cry it hits close to home and I can relate absolutely. Def. going on the favs.

Excellentae! I love this

I absolutely adore the chorus and the verses. Only one that really doesn't do much for me is the second verse, but that's because it's on a more personal level and not really something you would hear on the radio. But again... wow, you know you have my awe and respect, right? Sheesh... I wish I could do this...

Again, great opening!! Love the imagery and how nature was included. I LOVE the exaggeration "All the thousands of kids and teachers" or maybe it's not an exaggerationg where u come from hehe. But yeah, i've never been new, but i've tried to imagine. it reminds me of "stand by me" (temptations). Nice!

Wow...this is brilliant work. The emotion and desire really comes out in it. I'm impressed! Good job!

I've been reading your work for a while, and I love this one just as much as the rest of it!
~Fyn

wow, this sounds like something that happened to one of my friends lately...nice song though...it is a song right? yea, the ye-ah-ya's gave it away...lol...i will try to r & r some more, lata!

so relatable for so many people, I like this "one more time." Thanks for my review on "Beyond the Words."

We liked it. It reminds of a situation we were once in with ouor freinds randy and travis. We can really hear it as a song. We especially liked the repitition of "One more time." It was certainly appropriately named. We liked how you changed the chorus just a bit every time and your spelling is excellent. No mistakes. That's rare.
Please reveiw us back. Thanks.

Good! Very good!
Well, not much to say other than it's very well written and deserves all the good reviews it recieves.

it was absolutely marvellous. keep writing ya!

The power of friends. I really like this poem..song..thing O_o. It's sad, but the meaning is beautfully protrayed. One more time...one more time. Fantastic!

Ergh I've had a virus on my computer..if that's any reason for not reviewing enough of your stuff. But I'm back to read it all because well...this one is great. Your stuff is so...perfectly formed. I don't know how to put it into words. But I would love to hear them the way you hear them cause they're so lyrical and could be interpreted so many different ways. You're very talented.

Aw, this one is really sweet. I had someone in mind who could sing this song good, but as the page was loading I forgot! That sux. But this is really great, I love all of your songs! :)