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Good Riddance
The Weird Queen
2004-05-02 . chapter 1
Very good, it would make a good horror story too. Love your stories!
whohasthezebra
2004-05-02 . chapter 1
How disturbing... Neato! Good choice of murder weapon, cold hearted. He decayed?? Who sent the silverware? I like this.
Amor Vincit Omnia
2004-05-02 . chapter 1
Pretty nifty! Keep up the good work.
_Amor_
metropolis noir
2004-05-02 . chapter 1
Pretty good. One little suggestion would be to remove the fiance's name, since no one else in the story has names.
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