-just smiles-

LOL, I don't know how to take this one really, but it was still very good. I liked the last stanza the best. Great job! :)

I like alot...i love stories told in poem form, very good

ooh of most of the other ones ive read, i think i like this one the best! :D

lol! cute

Eh... fuzzy imagery, and alittle blurish as to what this ugly male 'cursed with blight' is doing. Is it you or her obnoxious boyfriend? Ah, anyways, if you're going to have a rhythm, follow through as far as possible with it. Don't let it get lost.

Quite a nice poem...although I do not see how her 'beautiful form' could be unmarred even with someone all over her the way you describe it :P