I like the way you have set this story up for many possibilities, and found your descriptions amusing, but in places a little factual. Overall, very interesting, I look foward to reading more!

your writing is good, if only a little too factual, but that's alright since this is a prologue/introduction of sorts. The only thing that I can really complain about is how stereotypically unique the family is. Foreign. Twins. Tragic background. Emo. It's a set up for a very cliche and over done story, but I'm assuming you can mold it into something semi-original.

looking good, can't wait to read more! :)