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letyoursoultakeflight 2009-11-02 . chapter 1
Beautifully written :)
The Proxy Ninja 2005-07-07 . chapter 1
The title made me smirk. I liked this piece very much. The mood made me feel a little empty and numb, because I could relate to it. And when poems appeal to emotions with strength and conviction, they're good poems. Even a passive one like this is powerful.
Kelpylion 2004-09-01 . chapter 1
Ach, that was perfectly put. I'm going through a really long spell like that myself, and it's highly depressing. Or maybe I have cause and effect mixed up there?
AmethystPisces 2004-05-02 . chapter 1
Very haunting and at the same time beautiful. I love the first and second paragraphs. I'm losing pieces of myself too.
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