 jenn 2004-12-06 . chapter 3 I THINK THIS IS THE GOSH DARNIN MOST FREAKIN SHITOCKIE MUSHROOM EATIN' AWESOMEST ARSIN" BUTZ A SMAKIN STORY OF ALL TIME IN THE LAND OF COWS! |
 Ultimate Schuyler 2004-05-29 . chapter 3Weird... ^^; Oh, and I made a mistake, it's Molly who's the pirate isn't it? Um... see! That's me point! I can remember who's who, but if you didn't put who was saying what, I wouldn't have a ghost of a chance at guessing it. ^^;; |
 Ultimate Schuyler 2004-05-29 . chapter 2LOL! LOL LOL LOL! ^_^ I love it! But perhaps you could distinguish the people's personality's a little more? I mean Brian is easily recognized because he is THE PONDEERER (dramatic music) but the others... I really can't tell Halley from Maria. Kris is the main character, so I know her. But isn't Maria supposed to be a pirate? Why not make her talk like one? ^_^ Okay, I'm done. |
 Ultimate Schuyler 2004-05-29 . chapter 1^_~ LOL! I loved it. This was terrific! You have much potential... what are woots? o.O;; |
 Nickolaus Pacione 2004-05-28 . chapter 2This was just way too weird. People think I have a weird imagination, but you -- this just way too weird. |
 Sahfire 2004-05-09 . chapter 1Creepy...but FUNNY! |