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| Unicorns+Rainbows 2007-08-01 ch 1,  | abuseI've only read chapter one and I am already interested in the story, which is awesome. Only 22 more chapters And I'll know how it ends. ^w^ |
| A. S. Reid 2007-08-01 ch 23, | abusei adore this story SO much. it has got to be one of my favorites. so why stop here? i would love to read more, if possible. thank you for writing such a heart wrenching tale of love that so many people can enjoy. sincerely, A. S. Reid |
| Yuniko 2007-07-22 ch 23, | abuseDesiring some violence to show up within the next few chapters hopefully. Not that I don't like the characters or something. Just saying... |
| Gogoh 2007-06-24 ch 23, | abuseIt's not the story, it's the AUTHOR! I REALLY enjoy her fics! Hate to do this, but Kakyou fans, you should check out my new fic "Night-In-Gale"! It's for you too, Kakyou! NIG is M-rated and twisted, makes you think and blah blah...It won't let you down. |
| black_rose 2006-12-11 ch 23, anon. | abusehmph...not good but not bad either |
| Cinnamon-sama 2006-09-19 ch 23, | abuseKei's departure was not cowardly; I would say 'noble' under the circumstances. As was her advice and request to young Kaori. Another excellent chapter. |
| takemehometonight 2006-09-16 ch 23, | abuseThat last line will stay with me forever. Sounded so emo. ;_; |
| KonekOniko 2006-09-13 ch 23, | abuseI love the pure simplicity and elegance of your writing...it's like poetry, you express so much in saying so little...hehe, update soon? =) |
| Yatori Shizuku 2006-09-06 ch 22, | abuseConcisely brief, but poignant and sweet. This chapter's insight into Kei's thoughts and character, as well as highlighting her dutiful devotion to Souji and her conflict/relationship with Kaori, expands her as an interesting and likeable character. Ah, I've been too long without your fics... Beautiful. |
| Maiya 2006-08-04 ch 6, | abuseAh, a different point of view this time. I admit I like this view of little Reiko. I hope this continues. |
| LIPSTICK,FLAMINGOS,ROCKROLL 2006-08-01 ch 22, | abuse::Jaw falls on floor:: O_O did he just? what? he just kiss ed him? HE just kised HIM! she? what? ::Faints:: P.S. cant wait till next chapter!! |
| blackrose113 2006-07-27 ch 22, | abuseThis is a very interesting and unique story. It reminds me of the manga 'Dolls' in the way that it's almost a bumch of short stories weaved together. I'd like to tell you, though, that there are some things that I don't quite get, like 'a poised look'. Do you mean a poisoned look? And often times you write things like "I want you to hurt. I don't want anyone to hurt" and leave out a word that could totally change the meaning of a sentence. Still, I hope you update soon! |
| Liviania 2006-07-23 ch 22, | abuseInteresting chapter, nice and quiet. Livi |
| Cinnamon-sama 2006-07-20 ch 22, | abuseI love Kei's reflections in this chapter. Her warring emotions are beautifully portrayed. Simply lovely! |
| Cindy Moon 2006-07-19 ch 22, | abuseI'd never thought this would get updated! =] You've really made my day! -Cindy Moon *) |