hey, sorry to bother you, but what's wrong with all of the stories at fictionpress? I can't read any of them, not the songs of anything... Please help if you can...

Yeah, it's seems he does care huh. It's a real great introduction, can't wait to see what happens next. Write on!
R&R me please
~ JD

Okay, this is a good start. Unidentical twins, an argument, a runaway, it's all good, but I find it a bit short and to the point, not necessarily a bad thing, but doesn't Kristin have any doubts about leaving home? I guess no-one cares about her running to her room?
Anyway, it's good,
And onto the next chapter.
~ JD