|Reviews for What If?|
| Techno 5/2/06 . chapter 1
Especially with our liberation day comming up (5th of May for us Dutch peeps) this is a good one to read.
The only thing that kinda disrupts it at the end is the fact you ask the same question three times in a row. I don't know if Hungary is special to you so I can't really judge it. Maybe it would look/read better if you ended with that question only asked one time but with three answers in a row... below each other... each following answer bigger and more important than the with a climax sorta say.
The holocaust hit more groups of people than just the Jews though, so with that in mind, maybe you can change the description a bit.
All the criticism aside... I still think this is a good piece of work.
| Erin 7/31/05 . chapter 1
Wow that was really well writen and very true. although kind of sad
But I liked it
| Varion 3/22/05 . chapter 1
This is a very thought provoking. I would almost call it prose. It is also another example of life through writing. This piece appears to be personally revealing of the author.
| Kuiya 9/1/04 . chapter 1
Hey! I finally got around to looking at your stuff. I'm reading poems first. This one was very powerful... Kinda scared me... But still, I thought it was a good poem.
| Earthsong12 5/15/04 . chapter 1
Aww, sad. Very good.
| sillygirl180 5/3/04 . chapter 1
Hey, I think you should have won thats alsome best I have read yet!
| Gunoung7 5/2/04 . chapter 1
Wow, that was really good...
Thats all I can really say. Very sad at the end...