| Reviews for What If? |
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Techno 5/2/06 . chapter 1 Especially with our liberation day comming up (5th of May for us Dutch peeps) this is a good one to read. The only thing that kinda disrupts it at the end is the fact you ask the same question three times in a row. I don't know if Hungary is special to you so I can't really judge it. Maybe it would look/read better if you ended with that question only asked one time but with three answers in a row... below each other... each following answer bigger and more important than the with a climax sorta say. The holocaust hit more groups of people than just the Jews though, so with that in mind, maybe you can change the description a bit. All the criticism aside... I still think this is a good piece of work. |
Erin 7/31/05 . chapter 1 Wow that was really well writen and very true. although kind of sad But I liked it |
Varion 3/22/05 . chapter 1 This is a very thought provoking. I would almost call it prose. It is also another example of life through writing. This piece appears to be personally revealing of the author. |
Kuiya 9/1/04 . chapter 1Hey! I finally got around to looking at your stuff. I'm reading poems first. This one was very powerful... Kinda scared me... But still, I thought it was a good poem. Ku |
Earthsong12 5/15/04 . chapter 1Aww, sad. Very good. |
sillygirl180 5/3/04 . chapter 1Hey, I think you should have won thats alsome best I have read yet! |
Gunoung7 5/2/04 . chapter 1Wow, that was really good... Thats all I can really say. Very sad at the end... |