dude it is a sci fi/horror story. its supposed to be scary.

you're trying to scare me, arent you? that guy was a freaking cannibal. he was psychotic. stop this scary crap. other than that, update soon.

okay... the last two chapters had way to much sexual content for may taste. I refuse to read this anymore if you have that again.

really weird, but interesting nonetheless. good job.

Quite a few errors here, mighjt want to grammar and spell check it before posting.
Cheers,
D.A.