wow...i like this one best...my favorite line? the last one. it definitly completes the poem. I somehow always find it hard to totlally complete a poem. i love your style of writing! its so...picturesque. You'll find that my poems are very different...anyways, great poem!

This is wonderful...it tells more of human nature than i would have imagined with a title like that. I love thre AB rhyming sceme-it actually works in this poem (its offen misused) and i am glad you did not separate it into stanzas. I don't think I would change much but the flow..on some parts the flow of words is somewhat interrupted with one too many words, but its not very noticeable-Great job!

This gives me hope somehow... great job...