Beautifully sensual, yet conflicted. Maybe I'm just too attracted to poetry with some kind of sexual-sensual undertone, but I enjoyed reading this. You paint a vivid picture. Nice job here.

'Ello Juror Number Superman! 'Tis I! Juror Number Phat Ugly ** reviewing your poems and such! I like this, very well written ... though I did not know you wrote such things! -blush- Just kidding! I do like it though! It flows well and then the end is just ... sad in a way I can't quite explain.

Excellent.

it's really well written and passionate yet also detached at the same time. but i think (hope) that was the point because of the sort of world weary point of view it is written from. ? sorry if i'm completely wrong and aren't making sense. in essence i liked it a lot.
~whyt forest~