What a lovely poem. I like the repetition and style used in this work, and the use of all of the other poetic devices. Excellent Job!

thats really cool, im likin it!

That's really good, it flows really well so would make a good song.
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I love the imagery given off here...you're quite astonishing as a writer, one of the best on this site! Just a mistress of words.

Really cool poem. The repetition helps the meaning and flows well. Although you might have used the repetition a smidgen too much, this poem still holds together really well and carries an upbeat message. I really enjoyed reading it. Of course Interpreting it was much more fun! .

Wow, very… interesting to put it plainly. This is very well done. I’d like to invite you to a writing forum. I hope you enjoy the community and share some of your interesting works.
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I love the beautiful descriptions. Amazing poem!