 Zarancids 2004-12-18 . chapter 1I found the humor in the story, ain't bad. Although your descriptions are nice, they're over done at times, and your timing is a bit choppy. Would make for a better short story if you toned these factors up a bit. |
 Aemilia 2004-08-30 . chapter 1Yeah...I'm still not done.
Sometimes Nicholas can get a little too stoic for my taste, and I think his relationship with Nickodamous adds some flavor to his personality.
-Aemilia |
 Psycho Idiot 2004-08-02 . chapter 1It's cute!
I love Nicholas, too.. more so than David. |
 R.O. 2004-06-16 . chapter 1 I can honestly say that I would never have expected the Zerg to pop up here in that manner-very unique story you have done. |
 Josee Poesee 2004-05-30 . chapter 1hahah! So why dosent he like fainting couches?
*~* Dy *~* |
 Peachez 24 2004-05-09 . chapter 1 *chuckles* Ah... Nickodamous is such a loveable nut. They're a bit of an odd pair but fun none the less. And it's short and sweet ^^. Keep writing!!
Peachez ^_~ |
 MoonLitDemon 2004-05-08 . chapter 1That was undeniably great. And cute. I can just picture it happening. Your style of writing makes everything seem very realistic. Excellent.
Happy Hunting,
MoonLitDemon |
 Innocent Green Eyes 2004-05-04 . chapter 1hehe Who doesn't get the urge to write an extremely short and completely pointless story? =) THis sounds like something my cousin would write. ^.^ (Evil Cranberry) Thanks for the laughs!!
God bless,
Greeny |