| Reviews for Zerg Rush |
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Zarancids 12/18/04 . chapter 1I found the humor in the story, ain't bad. Although your descriptions are nice, they're over done at times, and your timing is a bit choppy. Would make for a better short story if you toned these factors up a bit. |
Aemilia 8/30/04 . chapter 1Yeah...I'm still not done. Sometimes Nicholas can get a little too stoic for my taste, and I think his relationship with Nickodamous adds some flavor to his personality. -Aemilia |
Psycho Idiot 8/2/04 . chapter 1It's cute! I love Nicholas, too.. more so than David. |
R.O 6/16/04 . chapter 1 I can honestly say that I would never have expected the Zerg to pop up here in that manner-very unique story you have done. |
Josee Poesee 5/30/04 . chapter 1hahah! So why dosent he like fainting couches? ** Dy ** |
Peachez 24 5/9/04 . chapter 1 *chuckles* Ah... Nickodamous is such a loveable nut. They're a bit of an odd pair but fun none the less. And it's short and sweet . Keep writing! Peachez _ |
MoonLitDemon 5/8/04 . chapter 1That was undeniably great. And cute. I can just picture it happening. Your style of writing makes everything seem very realistic. Excellent. Happy Hunting, MoonLitDemon |
Innocent Green Eyes 5/4/04 . chapter 1hehe Who doesn't get the urge to write an extremely short and completely pointless story? ) THis sounds like something my cousin would write. . (Evil Cranberry) Thanks for the laughs! God bless, Greeny |