Excellent story. Shows a ton of promise. Hope to see more from the series.

More, more, more, more! I'm begging you, please allow me to indulge in my precious amusement. More, please?

I can see the romance sparking between Eve and Jacques. *Squeals in excitement* I LOVEIT!

Interesting beginning.

Wow!! This was really good, i can't wait for next year. It's a really absorbing story, i just couldn't stop reading it!

I must say that I absolutely adore this story. Really! I read it all in a day... more like in one setting, and I barely moved for a few hours straight. Even though you have some similarities to Harry Potter, like quidditch and such, I think that it is truly unique. Lovely story, and I can't wait for more.

For a fan fiction, sort of, this was an interesting story. Things were disjointed and truly without a complete ending. I went to your website, and saw that you hated SAM, but to be fair there is much worse, and seldom better on FP. Not being into HP, some of the alusions are futile, and lots of the 'in' humor, dosen't translate. That's the problem basing a story on something without universal appeal. Now that you're in college, you could possibly restructure some of this story to be more standalone. Or possible transfer it to FanFiction. I liked the story overall. I just didn't like being in the dark so much.

I read the whole thing in 2 days as well as the first part of the sophomore year. Please please please continue!! :) I loved it!

Question: Is the end SUPPOSED to be all in italics?
Can't wait to read the last chappie! ^_~

Consider it a compliment that I don't review for every chapter. Means I wanna read the next one sooner. (well, and the fact I'm too lazy, but we'll make that an afterthought.) ^_^

Love the way you're incorporating the elements. I have this thing with elemental magic. A lot of my stories incorporate it as a primary, hidden magic. Or something like that. Kinda confusing. Great story!!

In this chappie, you mention "Dragon's Wart". Do you mean "wart" as those gross little things people get on your skin (for lack of better description), or an herb? Cause if you mean it as an herb, it's spelt "wort" with an "o", not an "a". ^_~

Not a bad story! ^_^
Really lazy reviewer here. Prefer just to go onto the next chappie as soon as possible. Basically, with a whole bunch of chappies still to read, I'm too impatient to review every chappie. *heh* Update!

(Also my reviewing name of Fanfiction. Don't have an account on either, but plan to post my stories on both as soon as I can.)
Not a bad story. Doesn't sound like Harry Potter to me, just so you know.
By the way, you misspelled "pursued". Heh. I'm gonna start jotting down all the spelling mistakes you make, since I can. Or not... (I'm too lazy and impatient...)
Keep on updating!

cool cool, i noticed several similarities to harry potter... hm, anyways, i liked it overall