 WindStarsAndWave 2004-07-09 . chapter 1._.; Wow, I wanna know what happens... xX That was really good.. oO Are you gonna continue this... >>; I hope you do... Oo Because I wana know~ ^^ Hehe.
._.; Seriously. .:poke:. Do it!! |
 Neris 2004-05-24 . chapter 1Perv. You so did that on purpose...
So Sar, what's your veiw on **? >:D |
 Chris (Fantaysfan2610) 2004-05-18 . chapter 1 wow, i liked it! i liked it alot, itts short though !_!, i wanna know what happens. i too hope i can get some creative story's out of my mind and onto paper, or into some art as well. i want to post a somehting on DA thats got a story with it, but i dont know when that will be.
awsome story, but i get a little lsot somewhere in the beginning, the transfer form dream to reality is nice, but i get congused in the transfer though, needs to be ore detailed. ^_^
have a good one ^_^ |
 sciagraphus 2004-05-13 . chapter 1What's wrong with liking Toffe?
And you already know how much I like this story. :) |
 sciagraphus 2004-05-11 . chapter 1 Toffe! |
 Celeste Se'oir 2004-05-07 . chapter 1Man, marry the stupid cat already will yah! Jeez, it's the only possible place you could hve gotten this.
Well, anyway, it's cute. I'll have to remember this later.
Later,
~Ffuffy~ |
 Nataly Ravenlock 2004-05-04 . chapter 1Aw...I think I'm sounding a bit repetitive, but this one's sweet too. You're getting mushy on me, aren't you? It is cute though, makes me want more than just a one-shot, to see if she would ever find him again. It makes a nice beginning if nothing else. Its a little too short for a one shot in my opinion, definitely needs a bit mroe meat on the bones, if you catch my drift. Other than that, not too shabby. |
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