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WindStarsAndWave 2004-07-09 . chapter 1
._.; Wow, I wanna know what happens... xX That was really good.. oO Are you gonna continue this... >>; I hope you do... Oo Because I wana know~ ^^ Hehe.
._.; Seriously. .:poke:. Do it!!
Neris 2004-05-24 . chapter 1
Perv. You so did that on purpose...
So Sar, what's your veiw on **? >:D
Chris (Fantaysfan2610) 2004-05-18 . chapter 1
wow, i liked it! i liked it alot, itts short though !_!, i wanna know what happens. i too hope i can get some creative story's out of my mind and onto paper, or into some art as well. i want to post a somehting on DA thats got a story with it, but i dont know when that will be.
awsome story, but i get a little lsot somewhere in the beginning, the transfer form dream to reality is nice, but i get congused in the transfer though, needs to be ore detailed. ^_^
have a good one ^_^
sciagraphus 2004-05-13 . chapter 1
What's wrong with liking Toffe?
And you already know how much I like this story. :)
sciagraphus 2004-05-11 . chapter 1
Toffe!
Celeste Se'oir 2004-05-07 . chapter 1
Man, marry the stupid cat already will yah! Jeez, it's the only possible place you could hve gotten this.
Well, anyway, it's cute. I'll have to remember this later.
Later,
~Ffuffy~
Nataly Ravenlock 2004-05-04 . chapter 1
Aw...I think I'm sounding a bit repetitive, but this one's sweet too. You're getting mushy on me, aren't you? It is cute though, makes me want more than just a one-shot, to see if she would ever find him again. It makes a nice beginning if nothing else. Its a little too short for a one shot in my opinion, definitely needs a bit mroe meat on the bones, if you catch my drift. Other than that, not too shabby.
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