Thanks for reviewing 'The Curse of Wolf Manor'. You asked me to read some of your work, and I mustn't say no to a fan, so here you go.
Well, I can tell it's going to get very good. My only advice is to lengthen it a bit and add in some description. And later on you should explain why Rose is running away.
Otherwise, this is good! Keep writing!
P.S. Sorry this isn't signed, but for some reason it won't let me log in.

Great story cousin. Can't talk long, periods ending.

not bad! By the way.. I chose 'the matrix has me'!

There is going to be more.