i feel like will smith when in one scene from the fresh prince he pretends his hands are a knife and starts making cutting motions in the air and phil asks what are you doing, and he says cutting the tension.

i gues u hav to see it for wat i jst said to make sense.

i like this but u havent updated in soo long... wat gives dude? anywho, u write well. ;)

I really enjoyed reading this story. Please update soon!

I like. :-) However, I do have one question. Is Brandon's story about being cheated on true?

I was actually pleasantly surprised when I read this story...I thought it was going to be cliche, and in some ways, it is, but not overly so. I mean, when I opted to read this story, I was hoping the two main protagonists would end up 'happily ever after' in the end...(I hope you don't decide to change that...I'm a sucker for happily ever after...)
I think from the prologue, your writing has greatly improved...I was abit hesitant at first when I read the prologue, but the story has roped me in and kept me interested. Bravo. UPDATE SOON AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
-kemi

i tried to like tyler, but i just can't! i think cheating is the lowest most disrespectful thing anyone in a relationship can do. and i think men who live to be 'players' are just sad. i know he's imperfect, and the point of the story is that he matures and changes.. but i don't think people in reality change from one thing to the complete opposite (cheating/player->loving/dedicated). but, i really like the plot idea.. especially the summary.. that sometimes it takes the person who broke your heart to mend it. and i was reading this at 1am in the middle of night so i'm a bit out of it lol.

this fic is so good, i couldn't stop reading it for a minute, i just blew through all 12 chapters and i so hope you update sometime soon. i know it's been a while but i am seriously hooked, would love to read more! this is too amazing a fic to not continue :)

AWSOME that was SO amazing. PLEASE continue!

You are an amazing writer and I look forward to more of your stories.

You've got a good story here. Hope you continue it!

I SORRY I didn't stop at every chapter and review I just didn't want to stop reading!! I CAN'T wait until the next chapter...I guess I'll have to though.

Cool story!

man, i just found this story after forever! i thought you weren't going to update again. anyhow, UPDATE AGAIN!! SON

I think you should definetly go on its a great story i love it and I would love to see it finished as would others i think you've got a flair for writing and you should keep up the great work its amazing.

You're a great writer. I love "Jaded". Hope you update soon! I can't wait to read what happens next :)

Things are starting to be very interesting. Can't wait to find out what will happen next!