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| Z Star The Air Goddess 2006-05-19 ch 1,  | abuseWow, Sae almost felt the same way as I did before I started wearing glasses:) I can totally rleate to her. But I hope she'll be all right... Anyway, nice story. |
| Saiwa 2005-04-18 ch 2, | abuseThis sounds really good you should totally update |
| mallory-lori 2004-06-30 ch 2, | abuseHighly original! I'd love to see your next chapter soon! |
| yorumitsuki 2004-06-29 ch 2, anon. | abuseuwah.. so u'd finally updated! this is really really so nice and... sounding original to me. So, update sooner than last time cos' i'm sure i'll read it! luv it! |
| luhkiebunnie 2004-06-29 ch 2, anon. | abuse^_^ cool chapter. This seems like its gonna be a very interesting ficcie =) i hope you continue soon |
| luhkiebunnie 2004-06-16 ch 1, | abuseo!! this is interesting! i like, i really do like! i hope you update soon =) |
| SilencedDreams 2004-06-16 ch 1, | abuseim scared! maybe i shouldn't get laser eye surgery..hmm...i wouldn't want to anywayz..lol..good beginning..pleze continue..spooky beginning...::shudders:: i wonder if it wuz the hospitals fault..and if it was on purpose! *gasp* okay,,y am i talkin to myself? great story! update! |
| karayuquex 2004-05-06 ch 1, | abuseThis is NiCe... though very much spooky... iya! I'm neva gonna get a laser eye surgery! At least, I dun think i would get one since i luv my specs... =.="... you muz think i'm weird now den... well anyway, hope you'll continue it and I wanna hear your dream too! Hotmail: yorumitsuki@hotmail.com So, pls continue! |
| Kiyume 2004-05-05 ch 1, | abuseThat... is short, but good. It has a cliff-hanger, an excellent writing tool! I really do hope you continue this, because the plot looks really good! Just two things: Really popular kids have glasses, believe me, I know. And, a nurse would normally have her hair tied up in a bun, I think, for hygienous issues, especially if she's assisting the doctor. Hmm... I may be confusing this with a lunch lady, but oh well! I like your writing, and I hope you update soon, with longer chapters! By the way, I wanna hear your dream. My email is mikan1_68@hotmail.com! And, before I read this story, I was going to get laser eye surgery! Your story makes it exciting! |
| bizarro-yukino 2004-05-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a really interesting story! Great storyline...and very unique. Keep it up, I want to read the rest! |
| MySweetFracture 2004-05-04 ch 1, | abuseDUDE! I want laser eye surgery now!! That'd be awesome but kinda scary now that i think about it... |