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| hottie-200625661 2005-04-14 ch 1,  | abusethis poem is very deep nd you are very good at what you do. keep up the good work. i hope to see more form you! |
| Always Writing 2004-06-22 ch 1, | abuseI love this...it's really fantastic. I can't believe how you've conveyed so much into this. It's so...wow, I can't describe it. Amazing poem, seriously, well done. -Carrie |
| firewitch1soulwriter 2004-06-05 ch 1, | abuseI love it, brovo ::claps hands:: I do believe I know the feeling. -f.w1.s.w ^^ |
| BeyondRepair 2004-05-24 ch 1, | abuseWow, I must say I had forgotten about, but I'm sure glad I decided to go back through all the poeple whose stuff I used to review. This was absolutely fantastic. I don't really know what to say. I myself have never had to take pills, but I'm very close friends with a couple of people who do, one for medical conditions, and the other because she is bipolar, and from what they've tried to tell me, I can only imagine that this is what it must be like for them. Personally I liked the rhyme scheme, and I thought that "A drugged rendition of happiness" was just gold, that was an sbsolutely wonderful line. Great poem, I forgot you could write so well, I will have to keep my eye on you from now on...and no not in a creepy stalkerish way! (I've been doing that for months...was that a little too odd??...yes I suppose it was...hmm...time to end this review then.) |
| nine iron 2004-05-16 ch 1, | abuseGood complex deep well though out piece |
| Jennacharm 2004-05-07 ch 1, | abuseI like the end... It really ties the poem together. |