personally, i'd love to hear more of this. its good to break the boundaries, you know?

I forgot they were twins until the end XD I don't really like incest, but I definitely understand their difficulties - very good for describing "complicated" :)

Oh my god... thanks SO much for mentioning that site; I had to go look at it right away and it's such a cool idea!

This is such a neat idea! I'm totally joining that LJ community. I loved this chapter too...especially the line, "The stars were especially bright tonight, for some reason, and that wasn’t fair."

To be honest, I've thought you were an awesomly talented writer ever since I read "Almost An Angel" and I'm deeply gratified by your reading and reviewing my stories ^_^;; Thanks!

Wow, says so much and yet so little. I guess it is an elusive story ¿no? Leaves one with many questions. Again, this is very well written for a short narrative, you don't try to focus on huge storylines or cram tons of plot into a short length, you just write a scene. A very excellent skill to have, I must say.
-Keilah

Interesting. Sometimes difficult to follow. Certainly a good job writing around the word "disaster" Interesting in that we have no back story and yet don't really need one for the given situation.
-Keilah

Also very chilling. I like your writting style and how this didn't seem rushed. Very nice ambigious ending.
-Keilah

Well, it's really good considering it is written in fifteen minutes. I liked the mention of the ice cream at the end. Very haunting
-Keilah