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| astral boy 2004-07-07 ch 1, | that was a really great little story there. In the form of poetry which always makes it so much more meaningful and accepted. but I knew it would be good before i read it :D good work! and i' still going on your story! heh, i'm a rather slow reader... |
| hmm 2004-06-20 ch 1, | That was beautiful! I'm having a loss of words. That was absolutely beautiful. |
| FaydedMarionette 2004-06-11 ch 1, | Thats really sad...But, really really good. I like it. |
| Red Star Rising 2004-05-14 ch 1, | that was so awesome! wow! i felt each and everything he was feeling! this is one of your greatest works. |
| Ravens Cross 2004-05-06 ch 1, | Beautiful poem! There is so much emotion in it. Emotion of love and hate, sadness and happiness. I love it. It is so wonderful! What amazes me even more than that is how you took the poem so far and kept the rhyme and rhythm together...AMAZING! |
| Beyonder 2004-05-05 ch 1, | Wow. That was long, but very well written. Keep up the good work. |
| Pleonasm 2004-05-05 ch 1, | Wow. Wow wow wow wow wow. I have no idea what to say. I usually don't even read a poem if it looks long, but I don't know, this just completely enraptured me. It's absolutely amazing, it is. I seriously do not know what to say, this is just incredible. :) |
| DaenerysStormBorn 2004-05-05 ch 1, | i like it... long but flows well and i really really like it |