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| Nadia20 2004-05-12 ch 1,   | This went from Confusing and No Real Story Line to incredibly emotional at the end. I loved the end!! The episode with the teacher and the long descriptions and thing about buying meat were not really needed to enhance the story, but I did find the part about the "frozen foods" section rather entertaining. You're right, you have come a long way! But isn't it fun to look back at old stuff and laugh at yourself sometimes? I do that a lot with my old stories. It makes you glad about getting older! ;) Good job, to your past and present self. |
| Ravens Cross 2004-05-06 ch 1, | Whoa! Okay, I will be honest when I say that I was a bit confused in the beginning and still, I am not sure what the whole episode with the teacher was all about. The end was very interesting. I can apply it to my past life, so well you don't even know. This one touched me. |