I never reviewed this? -slaps herself-

I like this one. Connecting dreams to mist is neat. It also gives me the shivers (the really good kind). Good night and sweet dreams, Mime.

This one is sweet to.

Oh this is so pretty and simplistic! The idea of fog being liquid gray is beautiful; I love this poem.

how apt
very nice

wonderful! honestly!
i'm already having fun reading your poems!

I'm impressed. You're such a good poet and you need few words to portray a meaning.

wonderful. a whole lotta power packed into those words. i loved your description of mist, how they are really dreams in another guise. brilliant write.

lovely

This is short yet very grasping. I really like it. Keep up the great work.
Jake.
p.s.: I wanted your user name but it was taken. bleh. Shinji Boi out.

nice! very cool and crisp. i especially like the plug for that birthday wish- lol

I usually dont bother with a poem this short, but still, cool.

woo that was cool! lol me like it =D

That's a really really cool form, I want to try it some point when I'm not so sunburned that it hurts to sit down at the comp for more than five minutes, ha. Lovely words, as per usual, and of course the whole is greater than the sum of its parts--and i went to bed at four last night, so no, it's not you, I really do make no sense.
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*composes*
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This reminds me of that bit in Hamlet, in his soliloquy where he contemplates suicide--"Oh that this too too sullied flesh would melt, thaw, and resolve itself into a dew." [adieu]. Although much less morbid. What lovely images.
~lyv

Amazing! Absolutely sensational. Great work!

Beautifully written!