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oohaysemag2001 2005-12-18 . chapter 1
The heart and the mind as they both intertwine can leave you feeling hopeless as if there is a huge void in your life. When everyone dear to you is leaving and you are left behind. What can you do? Your mind will say.

The heart will feel regret, a void of what once was and now is no more will enter your heart and mind, leaving feelings of doom and sadness.You wonder how can I go on alone, a voice say, you must go on with your life until you meet again.

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ode to a firefly 2005-09-02 . chapter 1
This only took you 5 minutes? Wow, good job! :)

~TPC~
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