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| pieces 2004-06-06 ch 1,   | Harsh. You can almost feel the disappointment coming off of this guy as he's being told all of this, feel how crushed it makes the narrator to say it all - even though it's true. There's a lot of read-between-the-lines there that I probably actually misread. I like it that way. Keep writing. Gabby |
| underjoyed 2004-05-28 ch 1, | This is absolutely beautiful. |
| do not resuscitate 2004-05-27 ch 1, | you have incredible talent. this was a great poem. |
| Just Wolf 2004-05-09 ch 1, | very powerful, passionate, bittersweet. amazing |
| Salt-Washed Mirror 2004-05-06 ch 1, | I love the imagery in this piece. Painful to read, but then, all the best works are. |