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| Lidless Eye 2004-12-13 ch 1,  | abuseAngsty... angsty angsty angsty. But I love it. Amazing work, you do. ~Lidless Eye |
| The Black Rider 2004-06-16 ch 1, | abuseSorry it's been so long; I've been lacking motivation to visit this site. Good poem. You explain yourself quite clearly and beautifully. Hope things are better for you now. |
| glitterjewele 2004-05-30 ch 1, | abusewow, i didn't know you updated! *sigh* but this is very good, nonetheless. i love how each stanza has its own personality of a sort ~ like they're all connected, but they're all distinct; you don't see that very often. LOVED the line "i think, therefore i am single" ~ absolutely fabulous, made me want to jab my finger at the screen and say YES! it's so true! really loved the parallelism in the second to last stanza, and the twisted cinderella illusion, as well. nice work! |
| CoolBeans18s 2004-05-06 ch 1, | abuseWow... its amazing how so simple seeming a poem can express so much! I really loved reading this. Its so deep and emotional... I hope everythings okay with you? Its a great poem! ~ CoolBeans18s |
| Lady B.V Rose 2004-05-06 ch 1, | abuseThis sort of reminds me of your "The Good Girl" only its nothing like it...did that make sense? Probably not but anyway...(sorry for not reviewing that story BTW...I'm a bit lazy). I love the 3rd stanza particularly, don't know why, but...heh, I actually have I think, therefore I'm single on a folder...^_^ Hehe, its wuvly... And I think therefore I'm not you on my English book...tee hee... L:BVR x (hyper...lol) |
| Ricer 2004-05-05 ch 1, | abuse:( I hope everything is ok? I'm only a phonecall away, even if we don't talk much anymore, I'm still here *hopes all gets bettewr in Elise land*... COFFEE NEXT TIME I'M THERE! -Ryan |
| Nails For Your Crucifix 2004-05-05 ch 1, | abuseVery nice diamond in the rough sort of idea. I hope you know that you are putting all this pressure on yourself that you're feeling. *Thinks of chem class and the whole, carbon+pressure thing* |
| Butterflies and Hurricanes 2004-05-05 ch 1, | abuseDeep. Very Deep. |
| Soviet 2004-05-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseSpiders crawling through my veins Inducing all these pains I want to slice open their homes And let them run free: Let the pain leave me Don't let your spiders run free |