It's disgusting how people can treat others like this...like they've got no emotions at all. The repetition might be overdone just a bit, but aside from that, this is great.

I think the repetition was over used in the first stanzer and although it conveys the neverending repulsion, i think was a bit too long and boring. otherwise it was okay, if a little pertentious.

This is really great! Sometimes I feel sorta like that...sniff...Great job!

wow this is so sad, and angry! This reflects my life too, in a way, especially the third stanza...just - WOW!
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summerdazed