It's funny, but a bit short!

Whoa... when you said short, you weren't kidding!! :P

Haha...Chris gets an image makeover...Yay I love this story! It’s funny! Please continue! *beam*

Wow, a french-speaking door! Yay french! Je parle francais aussi. It’s such a pretty language. ^__^ Sorry, went off on a tangent there. Haha about the intruder. I thought it was gonna be the guy from the store.
One more chapter to go...

Heh, this is funny. I like. ^_^ In the first paragraph I think you mean let alone, not yet alone.
Yay for this story! I’m off to read ch.5.

I like this a lot. One question: If they’ve been shot at and stuff before, why are they only leaving the country now?
On to read chapter 4...

Cool! I think i read this before... still *shrugs* that last section was... o.O a little over my head.
Also when she gets grabbed by the 'intruder', you should have left that hanging, before she looked up. Though I hate cliffhangers, well... you know. It would have created more suspence. Also a few grammatical and spelling errors... not too many though, good job!
Please conutinue,
~Karasu