whoa, this is realy good. very Emily Dickenson(sp)
great job
~me

this one was different, lol...nobody died in it and the Grim Reaper played a pretty big role, which is a rarity...Grim Reaper and no death? he must have had a bass beer, lol, have u seen that commercial? ok nvm
lol, the poem was very good, it was very original! lol, i can imagine that being in our english textbooks in twenty years...its a really good poem