hmm... i love it.

simple yet effective. good work!

deep! dats me all the time!
but only cuz the light in my rooms broken!! anyway much love x
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um... would be better if it were longer. may i suggest a sequel, saying that this is part of another poem you wrote?

That happens a lot when you're in conversation...good. Not the conversation part, but the poem and well...yeah.

Hey, that was really good, and thanx fur yur reveiw!

I like it! Especially how the first and last lines are the same, and that everything else is questions.
For my English poem I didn't use any specific style. If it seems like it, then it's just a fluke. Most of my poems I write freestyle.

Yay, great! Nice repetition in the first and last lines. Me likes! ^_^
BTW, Ancamna says if you don't review her, she won't review you. She says if you reviewed the Crown Keeper fanfic, you should have reviewed the rest (or at least some) of her other stuff while you were at it.
Yah, this sounds harsh, but she's not that mad (I don't think). Anyway, remember not to kill the messenger! And write more!