|Reviews for Sorry|
| CrimsonXxXStripes 11/26/04 . chapter 1
yes you are a really good writer i think i especially like the thing about intestines...it's really good when you use metaphors so maybe you should use them more often...well anyway i'm gonna read more of your poems now
| no good advice 4 life 8/9/04 . chapter 1
Beautiful! The last two lines iare very cute, but true. Your song from third grade does have a lot of potential! My first song (which will never be posted) was written when I was in third grade doesn't even come close how good yours is!