This story was awesome! I really loved Nyte and I'm glad you didn't kill him off, he's an intersting character and your storyline was good as well, and even though I didn't read your other two stories about Nyte up to the end it's amazing to see how your writing has improved.

Oh, yes, I love it! This story was awesome. And I don't care that you didn't kill off Nyte, or ended it with them being in love, or how predictable it all was, it was awesome! Clichéd or not - I don't think I would have liked it to end any other way. I wouldn't want to meet someone like Nyte in real life, but in fiction he's splendid, and so is Safia.

So, so awesome. Although a bit sad that Nyte never got that execution he so badly wanted.. you'd have thought, during that state of emergency.. but oh well. An N-shaped swimming pool will have to satisfy him, haha..

Haha, so far from boring, this chapter had me cracking up the entire time. Nyte is /hilarious/!!

ok so you do realise that 1m 90 is like small as? im like 5"8 and i get called short all the time. but im not that short so short would be like 5"0 and tall would be 6"0

interesting

Hi there! It's me again! ^^ Finally caught up with this... anyway, that's an interesting ending. I personally like how Safia owning Nyte with her words. If there was a live version, that would have been perfect. Like the exchange there as well too. It's very detailed and interesting. Wonder if you'll do a sequel to this story... anyway, in case you didn't know, I've put up a new story. Hope to receive your reviews soon! ^^

Hi there! It's me again! Well, I guess it's still only one more chapter to go. Anyway, on with the review! Well, I'm surprised and glad that nothing bad comes out this. The interaction is also very good. Wonder what's with Carmella's attitude towards Safia. And yeah, plus Safia's pregnant and I guess that the last chapter's gonna be rather interesting...

awesome beginning. i really like norisso, she seems like such a cute, but hilarious little girl. great beginning, i had a good review, but my computer ate it (for the second time today) srry, im really lazy but i will say niele seems like an awesome, uncliched vampire. awesome beginning.

dunno, if character bios are supposed to get a review or not.

however, the characters all look like one big happy family. okay, maybe they arent the brady bunch, but i bet theyll be far more interesting. anyways, didnt want to read anything youd be rewriting in the near future, so im reading stuff that happens later. that didnt make any sense, so ill leave with two words: good bye.

Hi there! It's me again! ^^ Well, it's been a long time since I've reviewed this story, but hey, it's a good one anyway. And now for the review. Well, it's really a major shock that Niele's actually Nyte's father and also about his past. I really hate the way he used Kash, but at least I don't really hate him now. Well, at least not that much... like the dialogue as well. It's also well written. Anyway, just to inform you, both Circles of Arven and The Elven Chronicles have been updated. Hope to see your reviews soon! Bye! ^^

nice beginning. nossira is a cute little girl, and you stick to her character throughout her dialogue. toothpaste is an adorable name :)i thought you introduced a few too many names and settings, though - it's hard to get it without any previous beckground. is this a sequel to something? seems like it is..but anyways, good job :)

Hi there! It's me again! Well, good to review this again... well, I'm wondering what will happen next. Wonder whether Nyte could make it in the end or not... is he gonna possess Safia? Like the interaction between Safia and Nyte as well... guess I'll have to see the remaining chapters to see what's gonna turn out of it... and yeah, Circles of Arven has been updated... hope to receive your review soon! ^^

I love how you write from the viewpoints of a lot of characters. Nyte is hilarious with his sarcasm and wit.

This is an amazing story! All your characters have such cool personalities and they all sound different from each other. I hate it when characters seem alike. Nossira is so casual, and Hess was cool.

Your characters are all so well-developed and everything, and I like how you wrote the story, your style is great. There's lots of description and it's all paced really well.

I'll read more later, until then, I'm hooked!

Hi there! It's me again after such a long time! Well, like the interaction here and Kash as well... poor fellow, he got cheated by Niele for nothing. That sucks man... well, I'm for guessing that Safia likes Nyte and I'm looking forward to see how this turns out... oh, one last thing, COA has been updated. Hope to see your review soon...