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| MagenDavid 2004-06-16 ch 1,  | abuseMy feelings exactly. Why should they give up their homes for us? Neway I'm impressed! I liked it A LOT! Keep it up! |
| Amaya Windsong 2004-05-09 ch 1, | abusevery good and TRUE! we r killin them all! EVIL OF US! okay, now that i have stopped spazzing. lol. but i have a thought: you say "stop all the building So we don't have a cow." that makes sense, in a weird sense, but if you look at it from some other point of view, WE DON'T HAVE ROOM FOR A COW! SO, OBVIOUSLY WE'RE NOT GONNA HAVE ONE! lol. past that spazz attack too. okay, imma stop now. good job, i love it, keep writing! |Rikku| |