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| SapphireEyes16 2008-02-21 ch 2,  | abusei luv the idea of ur story so far, keep updating! |
| lilylupin7 2006-08-27 ch 2, | abuseI can't decide! I love all your stories. Which one should you update first? I am in the midst of a dilemma |
| lordelfy 2006-06-30 ch 2, anon. | abusei like this, you should update= ) |
| Lonely Forest 2005-06-22 ch 2, | abuseGood job so far. I'm enjoying it! Keep up the good work! |
| sabine 2005-04-13 ch 2, anon. | abuseanother great story...cant believe ive spent the last 2 hours reading ur stories!! they're so addictive...and now i must go start my essay thats due in 2 days...hate college :( really loved ur story though, my first day of college was just awful! and now my last day is coming up soon, which is even worse cos am really not ready to go out into the real world :(:( ahh enough ranting, really hope u update this story one day! |
| SharonH 2005-01-28 ch 2, | abuseSo, I just read this. Hoping for an update soon. |
| anatidaephobiac 2004-05-31 ch 2, | abusei love the story... it's excellent. And the humor is great as well... Update soon! |
| Punk'd 2004-05-24 ch 2, | abuseWow, talk about an EVIL ** TEACHER! LOL, my aunt runs the Asian Branch of PETA and I've had a couple of run ins with them myself...Good job on this chapter! Good job on this story! I LOVE IT! |
| Patch 2004-05-24 ch 2, anon. | abuseGreat job so far! I love your the humour, don't care how sarcastic it is! Hope to see more soon! |
| drifting Rose petal 2004-05-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseanother wonderful chapter! update soon |
| baby girl 2004-05-23 ch 2, anon. | abusehey nice story so far. it seems like you are still getting the reader aquainted with the main character, jezebel, with these first two chapters. 3 things-1.) why name her after bitchy bible woman jezebel? if you wanna go all biblical, why not mary, elizabeth, ruth, naomi, etc? 2.) when is she gonna meet the guy...again?-that is if he is the sandles and shorts guy)? 3.) update soon! wanna read chapter 3! now! now! now! post soon |
| Drifting Rose Petal 2004-05-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like! and that has happened 2 me *shutters in rememberence* lol. it relates which is cool :) update soon |
| Fairytale Kiddo 2004-05-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is totally awesome! It's very well-written and I love the characters! Keep it up! |
| jhgfjvkjg 2004-05-06 ch 1, | abuseYou better update buddy! *pokes* jm... This girl's personality is damn funny. Poor thing. She should join People Eating Tasty Animals...lol sorry. I've had run-ins with them before...but I won't rant. (This time!) Anyway I wanna find out what happens next. It started out interesting. On thing -- aren't you supposed to indent paragraphs? Otherwise good job. Rock on. Rin |
| urban kitsch 2004-05-06 ch 1, | abuseI'm not so much a leather-pants wearing, spiked-heels kinda girl, but I can empthasize, unfortunately. Let's just say, never wear thick black levi's to a sport meet where the stands have no shade. There's going to be a continuation, correct? Please let there be a continuation... |