very nice...pretty sad...but nice...hugs smile and things ill get better hugs, bear

*smiles*
Nice, Jake...

I like this haiku it kinda creepy but what are you going to do? lol. I read your profile you life is confussing in a couple paragraphs!

Good haiku...very dark...

Better haiku than most (if not all) that I've read.
Nymph

ok...since I haven't reviewed you lately...here's a review...this is very good...I like it just as much as your others...*.* XOXOXOX- Lilah

wonderful haiku!

Hello-
Nice haiku here. Emotional haiku. Good job.

I like the darkness of this... very saddening yet exciting... well done...

I liked that. The short words made it feel very subdued, very lonely. It was understated- yet very emotive. I think you are good at this, keep it up!

nice job. )

It's sad! It makes me feel subdued inside. Nice alliteration

Hey
I posted another story. I t should be up by tomarrow. But One bad thing is that when I posted it FP had to fuck with it and now it looks weird. I like your haiku. It's so... Japanese. Well I'll see you tomarrow Jake.
bye bye stupid head!
PS. "Shit! Shit! Who the fuck is shooting at us?"
"I don't know. Fire mistels!"
"Shit guys. The mistels they are shooting us. Fire our shit!"
"But I am le tired."
"Well then, have a nap. THEN FIRE THE MISTELS!"
"Ah! Motherland!"

O. AWESOME. KEEP IT UP.

hey there!
now,i reallie like this.
i think that it's awesome.
keep it up.
l8rs
your irish lover
(in the U.S.
o' course)