good story you had me going there for a bit... i guess thats what you ment.

Now that was good, I wasn't expecting that the invaders were humans until that last sentence

OH HO HO HO! I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING!

your stories are just as good as the fanfictions you write.

Human Pride!

interesting concept. yuo could have expanded it, because it was a little generic. oh well.